Friday, September 21, 2012

 
Value Portraits Art Critique

                                                                                                                                                        
To create my drawing, I first had to recieve a picture from mr. Sands of a person in our class.  From that picture I had to determine any differences in value within the persons face.  Then it was a matter of tracing my outlines onto my sketchbook and shading acordingly to what I had traced.  Also smudging so that it didn't just look like a bunch of lines.
To find and separate the differences in value within my portrait, I held the picture with tracing paper against a light source, and circled any differences betweens shades of the face through a variety of random shapes.  By doing this I was separating parts of his face that would later be shaded differently.  Once I had these shapes I could relate to the photo on how dark each shape should  be.  I did this untill the whole face was shaded, then I smudged certain patches together.
My portrait is a little bit on the lighter side.  there is definately a range of colors, but I think their could have been more.  By shading more in different places I created the differences in value.
It is neat and has a variety of values. It may not look exactly like my person, but there are several alike features.  I think it is neat because there are no lines and the drawing actually looks pretty realistic.
Some problems that came into the way of my drawing include too much of a shadow on the person's face so it was hard to, trace, and also the fact that alot of the shading would blend together.  I fixed the tracing issue by hand drawing out some of the nonvisible features and also putting the tracing paper up against a light source.  For the shading, I went back and added darker patches to the face without blending much at all.

Thursday, September 6, 2012

Bambi->To->Bones

The original Bambi

Bambi-In-Bones


1. I think this is an ok drawing for me.  It was definately challenging to try and draw a skeleton that was arranged much differently than that of a human's, but it was still fun.
2. I believe it would have been a lot more detailed and closer to acuracy, if I actually knew what the skeleton of a deer looked like.  I could have made it look more realistic, or at least more porportional.
3. Since a bunch of these cartoons are irrealistic figures and people,  a lot of their body structures dont exactly look right when they are sketched, which made the activity fun.  We were able to create and visualize what we felt their bone structures should look like, since there really wasn't an exact look they had to have.
4. If I was able to redo this project from scratch, I would most likely attemp to add more bones to the structure so that the cartoon would be recognizablethe without it's outline.  Also I would probably try to get an example of a deer skeleton, beforehand so it would not look entirely made up.